10.31.2007

Hurts So Good

my vice
terse
and concise
excruciating
paradise
brilliant
on ice
once
twice
does not
suffice
at what
price
this glorious
slice
decadent
a sacrifice
hints of spice
my ache
precise
ignoring
all advice
to desist
no dice
leave me to
my own device

Once again, Darlings, Blogger will not let me post this poem the way I want to. Please click here to see the poem the way it is meant to be read.

3 comments:

Mega said...

Feels like I'm on may way down down down when I'm reading it.

Don said...

You have a true way with your words

Bruce Wiggins said...

You have a true way with your words