Cristal Vindicates
"Living well is the best revenge" ~George Herbert, English clergyman & metaphysical poet (1593 - 1633)
"I rhyme to see myself, to set the darkness echoing."~Seamus Heaney, Nobel Laureate--1995
she tolerates
the syndicate
they celebrate
bubbles dissipate
thinking complicates
infiltrates
seems to isolate
rather than liberate
bombshell detonates
indifference devastates
she has no duplicate
or alternate
fake friends speculate
as she decorates
should they imitate
or implicate?
this girl captivates
absolutely fascinates
detachment dominates
her reality separate
This poem is an example of sonic repetition which is not really a poetic form--it is more of a device, I suppose. Basically, sonic repetition is the repetition of sounds in a poem. So, in the above poem, 'ate' would be the repeated sound. I have written several poems using this device. It's one of my favorites because I can rhyme without apology.
7 comments:
I LOVE ALL YOUR WORK
Take no prisoners.
WOW...just WOW!
niiiiiiiiiice!
Of all the poetry I have read penned by you Saadia, this particular poem moved me the most.
Seems like you had your way with this piece. I like how you set the tone early and often.
Love the flippancy.
ate is ringing in my head...
ryc: hee hee... yup ~ jack
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